Globalization means a process in which particular aspects become similar in all parts of the world. It concerns economic, cultural and political areas among countries. Globalization has become intrinsic part of our life with both good and bad consequences. Quick exchange of information affects on our consciousness of the global situation and helps countries to collaborate.
Simultaneously the local aspects such as tradition is diminishing as a result of a mass culture and evolving technology. Furthermore many countries belong to national organizations which limit their independence. As the world turns into a 'global village', we become more and more aware and open to different cultures. Although this irreversible process causes many defects it is necessary for us to move further.
It would help if you organised your text more clearly. Instead of mixing up the good and bad sides of globalisation, first discuss the positives and then move to negatives.
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